{"id":163,"date":"2015-10-16T16:56:04","date_gmt":"2015-10-16T20:56:04","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/janicegraham.ca\/authorblog\/?p=163"},"modified":"2016-08-03T09:40:55","modified_gmt":"2016-08-03T13:40:55","slug":"physcial-description-vs-personality","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/jigraham.com\/authorblog\/2015\/10\/16\/physcial-description-vs-personality\/","title":{"rendered":"Physcial description vs Personality"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Writing is full of physical description being used as a short hand for personality. I&#8217;ve just realised that since I don&#8217;t use physical description then I&#8217;ve handicapped my characters. This, of course led to another discovery, I&#8217;m not very observant. I don&#8217;t watch people, I prefer to interact with them. But the activity becomes the focus of my attention and not the people around me. So I&#8217;m trying to describe a character now and I&#8217;m stumped. What does he actually look like and how does that mesh with his personality. Physical &#8216;ticks&#8217; help keep characters separate in people&#8217;s minds. When I look around at the people I know, whatever &#8216;ticks&#8217; they have are invisible to me. I am so used to them pausing before making a weighty pronouncement, or nibbling on finger nails or hair that I don&#8217;t see it as a &#8216;tick&#8217;. The tick doesn&#8217;t have to be intrusive or unpleasant, it could be what someone says when things are going well or bad. \u00a0The trick is to match the &#8216;tick&#8217; to the personality and then make sure you don&#8217;t wear out it&#8217;s usefulness. Easier said then done.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Writing is full of physical description being used as a short hand for personality. I&#8217;ve just realised that since I don&#8217;t use physical description then I&#8217;ve handicapped my characters. This, of course led to another discovery, I&#8217;m not very observant. I don&#8217;t watch people, I prefer to interact with them. But the activity becomes the &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/jigraham.com\/authorblog\/2015\/10\/16\/physcial-description-vs-personality\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Physcial description vs Personality<\/span> <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":[],"categories":[8],"tags":[],"jetpack-related-posts":[{"id":171,"url":"https:\/\/jigraham.com\/authorblog\/2015\/12\/15\/description\/","url_meta":{"origin":163,"position":0},"title":"Description","date":"December 15, 2015","format":false,"excerpt":"I decided that it might help my trouble with description if I practiced writing descriptive paragraphs. I started by first writing a description of a character and then writing a physical description of a location. Like most things, it went slightly awry. 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