Spring is here – I think.

It’s March and in Toronto the temperature has finally climbed well above the minus double digits. It’s been a cold winter. Toronto is not as cold as other parts of the country but it seemed that this year at least we could legitimately share the national pastime of complaining about the cold.

Let’s start again. I went and checked the historical temperatures for December, January and February. February was cold – double digit cold. The other months, not so cold. It looked to me that last year was colder for January at least. But what I remember of last year was not the cold but the snow. What does this tell me.

Cold is relative.

Cold is what others tell you it is.

Let’s take the second point first. If someone tells you something, which you can experience for yourself, who would you believe? This year the weather people kept saying how cold the winter has been, over and over and over. Well, yes it was cold this winter but colder than normal? not according the historical data I looked at. But when you are in the middle it’s hard to see the relativity of it all. So you buy into what you hear. It’s cold out there, really, really, cold. Well yah, duh, it’s winter. What do you expect. Colder than previous years. Well maybe for February but not over all. Perspective is what is needed. Perspective and long underwear.

But now we are into March and the first point comes into play. Spring is around the corner and the glories of having four seasons is unfolding before me. The temperature is above zero, – say 4 to 5 degrees C and what do you see: people running in shorts, people in light jackets, people  out and about. And I love it because I know that if this was November  and it was 4 or 5 degrees, people would be looking for their winter coats, staying in or dragging out their winter running tights. It’s all relative! The temperature is the same but what we feel is so completely different that reality is warped. 5 degrees in November is NOT 5 degrees in March.

Expectations are also different as spring unfolds. One of my daughters is on Vancouver Island and I was talking to her last night.

Me – “The snow is melting like crazy. It’s amazing how quickly it goes.”

Her – “The trees are blossoming here.”

Me – “What?”

Her – “What are those big pink blossoms, sort of like cherry blossoms?”

Me – “Magnolia?”

How on earth can it be so different from one part of the country to the other – the world I can understand but in one country that is supposed to be part of a northern climate! (Of course I understand the meteorological reasons – she’s on an island in the pacific and it’s going to be significantly more moderate there – but really!)

So spring is relative – here in Toronto hope springs in it’s inhabitants breasts and in Victoria it’s already sprung.

Learning about writing from reading … or not

I received the edited version of my book Beast Master. It was rather depressing all the changes that were suggested, but that is why you have an editor review it. Nina Munteanu made lots and lots of useful comments and even pointed out a grammatical usage which is different here than in the UK (which goes to show that spelling is not the only thing which is different). It will take a while for me to get through them all but one comment really stood out. She felt there wasn’t enough physical description, both for place and character. I found that both amusing and lowering because I had realised there was very little description of any kind and had done a huge edit to include description (mostly physical I have to admit), obviously not very successfully. Thinking about how important description is led me to think about why I didn’t include it in the book from the get go. That led me to thinking about books I read and the descriptions in them.

There is a lot of encouragement for budding authors to use literature as models for their own writing. In fact there are courses which are based around using the classics to help writers improve their own writing. I read a lot but physical description has never really impacted on me. I read for the story and the action. I couldn’t tell you what the main character of any of the books I read looks like, or what the land they are living in looks like. But I appreciate description which adds to suspense such as:

The wind was a torrent of darkness among the gusty trees.
The moon was a ghostly galleon tossed upon cloudy seas.
The road was a ribbon of moonlight over the purple moor,
And the highwayman came riding—
         Riding—riding—
The highwayman came riding, up to the old inn-door. (Alfred Noyse, the Highwayman).

The suspense in this first stanza is wonderful.  This is followed by the highwayman’s description which I could care less about. I wanted to know what was going to happen, so although I read the next stanza, I barely paid attention. Why? The only reason I can give is that I am a greedy reader and want to know what happens next NOW! As a result, all those little details describing the highwayman are ignored by me, skipped over, consigned to the background, in my hurry to get to the action. And the upshot is I ignore them in my writing. So now, I have to figure out how NOT to ignore them and believe me, I find it difficult, very, very difficult to describe what I see in my mind’s eye.

PS Loreena Mckinnitt has put the above poem to music. It’s worth a listen.

Reading on writing – Campbell part 2

Campbell talks not just about myth but also ritual, specifically rites of passage and the importance of them to humans.

….that the purpose and actual effect of these was to conduct people across those difficult thresholds of transformation that demand a change in the patterns not only of conscious but also of unconscious life (Campbell, Joseph. The hero with a Thousand Faces (Princeton, New Jersey: Bollingen Series XVII. Princeton University Press, 1968, pg.10)

These rites are not just for the individual partaking them but also for their families and communities. By taking part in the rite, the family members can also learn to accept the individual’s new role. This resonated with me. Two years ago my eldest daughter married. As is the case in many marriages at this time, she and her husband did everything themselves. We provided them with some financial assistance but the rest was done by them. It was a lovely wedding. As the mother of the bride I had absolutely nothing to do. My daughter would call to solicit an opinion but I was pretty sure she was asking other’s as well so it wasn’t anything noteworthy. I found it interesting how bereft I felt at the wedding and after. I chalked it up to the first child getting married, and thought no more about it.

Last fall my middle daughter married. She was married in the United Kingdom and since we live on the other side of the pond it was pretty much impossible for me to help her. I was so impressed that she included her future mother-in-law in many of the traditional bridal jaunts, like picking out the wedding gown. It came as a horrendous surprise, then, when I felt as bereft at her wedding as I had at the first daughters! It wasn’t until I read the section in Campbell about rites of passage that I realised that the whole messy wedding planning was a rite of passage for a mother and her daughter.

It has always been the prime function of mythology and rite to supply the symbols that carry the human spirit forward, in counteraction to those other constant human fantasies that tend to tie it back.  In fact, it may well be that the very high incidence of neuroticism among ourselves follows from the decline among us of such effective spiritual aid. (ibid p 11.)

The wedding planning provided an arena for the transformation of daughter to wife, from child who looked to our family unit for support to an adult creating her own family unit. But it also provided the transformation of the parents from seeing themselves as the ‘centre’ of their child’s life to seeing the child centering themselves on another person, their significant other. All these things are necessary and wonderful changes and the wedding is a rite of passage which marks it. But not having the opportunity to take part in the rite did not give me a chance to make my own transformation (and not because they did not wish it but because, for both of them, this is how weddings were planned by their contemporaries). Being the mother of the bride is not just a position in the wedding party, it represents a momentous change in the emotional fabric of the mother-daughter bond. The transformation happens on both sides of the mother-daughter equation and the wedding planning and day provides the rite of passage to mark this change for both.

 

Reading about writing

One of the fun things that I have discovered about writing  is reading about writing. Right now I am reading The Hero with a Thousand Faces by Joseph Campbell. I have Nina Munteanu to thank for introducing me to the book. (The other thing I’ve discovered is how much fun a writing course is.)   The book is heavily steeped in myth, mythology, folktales and Jungian psychology. I took a course about Jung and archetypes in university, low these many years ago, so I was familiar with many of the concepts he talks about. Campbell has drawn heavily on archetypes, backing them up with examples from tales gathered from around the world.

The book traces the journey of the hero. When we think about a good story, be it fantasy, mystery, or just plain fiction, the thing that makes it good is the journey of the main character. The journey may be towards enlightenment, solving a mystery, or saving a world but the journey stripped to its barest essentials is the same: departure, search, return.

Departure is the moment when the journey is started, either willingly or unwillingly. The hero has to leave where she/he is most comfortable and go out into the unknown to find something of value, to themselves, their loved ones or their world. It doesn’t matter about the scope. However large or small the reason, it is the scary first step into the unknown.

The search is where the hero is faced with trials. It is during this search that the hero comes into his own, learns about her/himself and finds out what she/he is capable of. Sometimes the hero is accompanied by friends or mentors, sometimes they find them on their way.  And sometimes, they are alone. They are faced with betrayal and  rescue from unlikely sources.

The return is the tricky part. They go back to their roots which may or may not actually welcome them. New knowledge is presented in opposition to accepted knowing. OR they may decide not to go back at all.

I’m not yet finished with the book but I am finding it so very enjoyable to read. The best thing that I have got from it? That we all are on a hero’s journey, right now, many journeys. From going off to school , to new jobs, to new careers, new homes, new families,to meeting new friends. It is so exciting to think that life is a heroic adventure. If things don’t go as planned, and we know that not all adventures are fun, that this is just the trial part of our heroic journey. The people that we meet are there to help or hinder us. That what we gain will help not just us but other’s around us. That we return to where we feel safe or maybe comfortable and from there we set off once more on another journey until we embark on the ultimate journey, death.

Character Longevity 

It is easy to create a character. Of course naming them is difficult. I find it easy to include someone in the story to move the action along or to help the main character. Naming is really hard. I always seem to blank when I get to actually giving the name. I know what I want them to do but who are they? I expect that the who will come clear as they grow through the story, but unfortunately I still have to give them a name. I like names that somehow reflect the character, but then, if you don’t know who they are then how can the name reflect them? It is a conundrum.

My response is to name the character based on some characteristic that reflects their importance to the story or just make up a name. I like the characteristic approach better. I use web sites which are for baby names which will give the meaning and nationality of a name. Other times I’ll pick a characteristic and look it up in old English or French or Spanish. Sometimes I’ll just pick a name because it suits me.

Once a character has a name they have a tendency to take on a life of their own. I start to like them. Well today I killed one of them off. I’ve never killed a character I’ve written about. And in this case the character appeared in Beast Master and I’m about half way through In the Blood of the King and I’ve killed him! I can’t believe I’ve done it. One moment he’s there fighting and the next he’s flopping on the ground dead and no one has time to mourn, they have to escape.

When I realised that was where he was heading, it took me a whole day and night before I managed to sit down and write it. And before I actually did put the words to paper, (or fingers to keyboard) I wandered around the house a bit. But the deed was done and in a few words a character that had lived was gone! The power of the author, and surprisingly it was really hard to do. I’ve heard that sometimes writers will get rid of characters once their usefulness is gone. It’s easier I suppose then have them disappear and have the reader say, “what did happen to so and so?” But in this case, it was necessary for my main character to feel this death.

I look forward to what my beta readers will say when they get to that part.  I hope he’s the only one to die. Time will tell.

Where or where are the other chapters?

I did a big push, well it wasn’t so much that I did a big push as my internet went down. The modem died and they had to send me a new one. Thank you to Primus for expediting so I received it the day after it was ordered. I was without internet for three and half days, count them 3.5 days! I don’t consider myself a massive internet user, in fact I’d categorize myself as a minor user; email, and a little surfing now and then to check out books. So it was quite a shock to realize that I missed it. So, to fill up the time I beavered away at Scrivener and finished doing the initial edit. I have posted the complete book on my website and you can see it at

http://janicegraham.ca/Books.html

The whole thing is there and now I’m going to let it sit and bubble away at the back of my brain and after it has been allowed to ferment long enough I’ll re-read and edit it with serious intent. In the meantime, let me know what you think about it.

Chapter 11 and 12

Chapter 11

“Greger was the investigator for these. He has a new mage, Borgny. Don’t know him,” Gruthwin said, waving the paper, “and I don’t know his scrivener at all.” He paced along beside Losian reading more. “It doesn’t look like they’ve got much to go on. We could talk to Greger, but I’d rather not.” Gruthwin muttered.

“Full of wind,” Losian said succinctly.

Gruthwin grinned. “Since all we have here is a list of the shops which have been hit, let’s try this Borgny first. Mages’ House is on our way to the shop district. ”

Losian nodded and turned left at the next corner. It didn’t take them long to get to the Mages’ House. It had once been an imposing residence, but time and chronic under-funding had dimmed it’s dignified presence. Losian and Scrivener trailed after Gruthwin as he ran up the stairs, pressing his hand against the door before opening it. The interior of hard marble was bare of any furnishings, decorations, or people. Losian had always thought that it reflected the nature of many mages, hard, cold, uninterested in anyone who had no magic. Gruthwin led them across the echoing hall to an entryway on the right. Here they found an apprentice mage who was rubbing at a stain on the front of his grey tunic. He looked up, wide eyed at Gruthwin. Losian who had no illusions as to Gruthwin’s capabilities assumed he was new and easily impressed by any mage.

“Sirwan Mage,” he said scrambling to his feet.

“Is Mage Borgny in? We need to speak to him,” Gruthwin said.

The boy pulled a large book towards him, scanning it, his lips moving as he ran through the list of names. “Yes, he is here. Do you want me to find him?”

“I’ll find him. His room is on the top floor?”

The boy nodded and watched with interest as they left. Gruthwin led them further down the hall to a set of stairs and ran up them. “He’s so new that he still is on the journeyman floor. He has to wait for a room to come free,” Gruthwin said.

“How long does that take?” Scrivener asked.

“When a mage dies then he’ll get that room, unless there’s a mage with more seniority. It’s one of the reason’s I have my own place. It’s free to live here but I didn’t want to wait for a room to come free and the journeymen’s floor is not quiet.”

They came out on the third floor and walked down the corridor, peering at the door labels. “Here it is.” Gruthwin knocked.

“Who’s there?” called a quavering voice.

“Gruthwin. We need to talk to you.”

“We?”

“Spregman Losian and our scrivener.”

There was a long pause before they heard the bolt sliding back and the door opened slowly. Scrivener pushed at Gruthwin and grabbed Losian dragging him down with her. The fire ball exploded against the far wall, glowing cinders falling onto the floor.

Gruthwin had stumbled against the door frame, the fire just missing his shoulder. He brought his hands up, pushing hard towards Borgny who flew backwards, disappearing into the room. Gruthwin followed up with a spell, his voice shivering through the hall. Losian pushed Scrivener away from him, crawling over to peak around the corner of the door jamb. The second spell hadn’t been required. Borgny was lying against the far wall, his neck at an odd angle. Losian got up and moved into the room, keeping behind Gruthwin until he was sure they were alone.

“Well, that was an interesting welcome,” Scrivener said. “Are all mages that touchy?”

Gruthwin shook his head staring down at the body. “I don’t know what he was thinking?”

“That you wouldn’t expect an attack,” Losian said.

Gruthwin turned to look at Losian. “But why?”

Losian shrugged and started to look around the room.

“What are you doing?” Gruthwin asked, his dazed expression beginning to fade.

“Looking to see if there’s anything here which can shed light on why he would attack, or on our cases.

Losian turned towards the door as he heard someone coming down the hall. “What’s going on here?” demanded a mage petulantly. The elderly mage, his pale face set in a frown, stood in the door way taking in the dead mage, Losian and Gruthwin. “Why is Mage Borgny dead Mage Gruthwin? It is Gruthwin isn’t it?” He demanded coming in to the room.

“Borgny attacked me, Mage Hlner and yes I’m Gruthwin,” Gruthwin said. “We wanted to talk to him about a case and when he opened the door he threw a fire ball at us. It was a wonder we escaped. I did what my training required.”

The mage glared at Gruthwin as if he was personally responsible for the problem then stomped around the room, picking things up and putting them down, pulling out draws and rifling through them. When he got to the dead mage’s work table he put his hands behind his back and carefully peered at everything on the table. He finally pulled a small piece of metal out of his pocket and very carefully opened up the grimoire on the edge of the desk. It was precariously perched and it fell off, hitting the ground with a solid thump.The mage jumped back and Gruthwin cringed. Losian noticed that the scrivener had moved to stand in the doorway, away from Mage Hlner and his rummaging around. The book lay on the floor, it’s front and back cover supporting it. The mage after a moment bent down and lifted it up by inserting the rod through the centre and placed it back on the table as he did, a piece of paper fluttered to the floor. The mage picked it up, looked a it then dropped it. He turned away from the work table and walked back to the door. “Leave, all of you. We must get a mage examiner in. This is most disturbing.”

Losian moved quickly to pick up the paper before following Gruthwin out the door.

“What is the problem?” Gruthwin asked the mage as he trailed him down the corridor.

“This is the second time this has happened. The second that I know of. The first one had also just passed being a journeyman, one of Mage Salner’s students. He lashed out at a journeyman who came to deliver a message from Salner.”

Losian grabbed Gruthwin by the sleeve and pulled him back, letting the duty mage move away muttering  “this is very strange”, to himself.

“What?” Gruthwin asked.

Losian held the drawing out for Gruthwin to look at. Scrivener came to look over Losian’s shoulder.

“If a scrivener did this, it’s a little crude,” Scrivener said disdainfully.

Losian looked at the circle bisected with a lightening bolt and shrugged. “It’s not as good as Notir’s work and he wasn’t the most proficient so perhaps Borgny did it. It fell out of Borgny’s grimoire. I can’t see his scrivener letting him have it,” Losian said.

“I wonder if the other new mage had one of these?” Scrivener asked. “Could you find out Gruthwin?”

“Maybe.” He hurried up to catch up to the duty mage.

Losian and Scrivener couldn’t hear the conversation as they followed the two mages down the stairs to the entrance hall. The duty mage left them there and hurried off to talk to the head mage. Gruthwin waited till he had disappeared down another corridor and then hurried back the way they had come. “His room is along the same hallway as Borgny’s,” he whispered. “The mage examiner will be up any moment to look at Borgny’s room so we have to be quick. Here it is.” He tried the door but it was locked. Losian pushed him out of the way and pulled out a set of lock picks.

“Mage examiner?” Scrivener whispered to Gruthwin as Losian worked on the door. “The mage who investigates untimely deaths of registered mages, accidents, that sort of thing.”

The door clicked and Losian stepped back to let Gruthwin open it. Gruthwin muttered a spell as he eased the door open. When nothing happened, Losian impatiently pushed him farther into the room and entered with Scrivener right on his heels. She pushed the door shut and leaned against it while the other two started to search the room. They froze when they heard the garrulous voice of the duty mage as he passed the door on his way to Borgny’s room.

“Hurry up,” Scrivener whispered.

“Nothing,” Losian said in a low voice to Gruthwin. Gruthwin shook his head and the two looked around the room. Scrivener gave a deep sigh and walked over to mirror on the wall, pulled it off, turned it over and picked at the back. Losian took it away from her and using his knife pried off the back to reveal a piece of paper. He opened it and then passed it to the other two; a circle with a lightening bolt.

“How did you know?” Gruthwin asked suspiciously.

“Borgny had it in his grimoire. I presume he felt that was the safest place. If they had found the drawing before, the old mage would have recognized it. So, if it was here then it must be better hidden. It looks like the room has been pretty thoroughly searched and neither one of you found anything so it was the only other place it could be. Well maybe not the only. I suppose it could have been on the top of the wardrobe or behind a wall, but I thought it unlikely,” she said grinning impishly.

Gruthwin went to the door and peered out. “They haven’t come out of Borgny’s room. Let’s go.”

The three crept quickly down the hall and silently down the stairs. They then strolled nonchalantly out the door.

“Where to now?” asked Scrivener.

“Let’s see if any of the shopkeepers sold this medallion,” Losian suggested.

They spent the rest of the day talking to shopkeepers about the robberies and the medallion. The shopkeepers couldn’t remember anything about the robberies and didn’t know about the medallions, although Losian got the distinct impression that they had not been interviewed before.

Chapter 12

They talked over what they knew during dinner at the Red Bell and decided that Gruthwin needed to find out if more mages had attacked others, not just at the Mages’ House but in other places. Losian decided that he and the scrivener would talk to the remaining shopkeepers in the morning. Losian left the other two as soon as he had finished dinner, wondering sourly if they were going to make dinner together a habit. Night had fallen and he chose to walk along the better lit route, not that it was particularly bright but some light was better than none. It was a wet and blustery night and a good portion of the street lamps had blown out. He couldn’t fault the watchmen for not keeping up with the lighting. It was a cold and thankless job with them apt to be victims as much as the citizens who the light was supposed to keep safe.

Losian was just passing the mouth of an alley near his room when he felt the blow coming. He managed to twist aside, but his assailant was too close. He was crowded against the wall and he couldn’t get at his hip knife. He tried to get at his throwing knife but he was kneed hard in the groin, the pain making him loose focus. Then his head was slammed hard against the wall. “No more questions,” a voice hissed in his ears. “The girl is gone. Leave it alone or you’ll be gone.” His head was once more slammed against the wall and he blacked out.

Losian woke shivering, his back on fire. He groaned softly as he turned over. He was still in the alley. Well, that was exactly where he should be. Yet he was surprised, given the last two times he woke in more agreeable surroundings even if he didn’t know how he got there.  And, as seemed to be the case wherever he woke,  mostly naked; no shoes, no trews, no shirt and no cloak. “Damn, damn, damn,” he muttered. “At least they didn’t stab you while you were out.” He levered himself to his feet and tottered out of the alley. “Almost home,” he whispered encouragingly. “Just a few more steps.”

Losian got to the door between a butcher and a green grocer. He fumbled at the chain around his neck which had his key. It took him two tries before he managed to get it into the key hole, except that the key wouldn’t turn. Losian leaned his head against the door. “No, no. This can’t be happening,” he moaned. He was stiff, sore and his back hurt. He tried again but it just wouldn’t turn. He pounded on the door. Surely his landlady would hear. She was always watching, her door always ajar to hear anything and everything going on. He pounded more on the door but there was no sound, nothing. He sat down, exhausted. The butcher wouldn’t be in for a while and he couldn’t just sit here. He tried to think about where to go but his thoughts were sluggish. Home? No too far, way too far. His brother’s house? He’d die first. Gruthwin’s then.

Losian concentrated on putting one foot in front of the other, resting every block or so, if leaning against a wall shivering was resting. He finally managed to reach the building where Gruthwin lived. How to get in? He just swayed there staring stupidly at the door. Try to open it, he finally thought. Miracle of miracles it opened. He dragged himself up the stairs. For a panicked moment he couldn’t remember which door it was. He had only come out of it, and that once. Then he remembered being able to look down the stairs at the ferwardens who had come to get him and Gruthwin. So the door at the top of the stairs. The rest became a foggy dream.

Losian woke suddenly. He was lying on his stomach, his back still hurting. Where was he? Right he had been mugged, no he had been attacked and warned away from the Landgraf’s daughter’s case. He smiled. That was good. Somebody was worried. He frowned. Who?

“You’re awake,” Scrivener said. “Don’t move. I’ll put more salve on your back. You’ve also got one big bump on the back of your head.” Scrivener spread something on his back and the pain started to fade. He grunted in appreciation. “You can sit up now and drink this. It’ll help your headache.”

Losian slowly sat up and realized that she was right, his head did pound and that he was in his smalls. He made sure the blanket was firmly anchored across his hips before he took the mug and drank down the concoction, bitter as it was. He looked slowly around the room searching for Gruthwin.

“Gruthwin went to get us something for breakfast,” Scrivener said, interpreting his movements. “And some clothes for you.”

Losian nodded, disliking the small smile that played about her mouth, and decided he’d lie back down until Gruthwin came back. He must have slept because Gruthwin was talking quietly to Scrivener, the remains of a meal on the table when he sat up again.

“What happened to you?” Gruthwin asked. “I opened the door and you fell into my room, unconscious”

“I was attacked and robbed.”

“That’s not like you to get robbed,” Gruthwin pointed out.

“It is if you’re already out cold,” Losian muttered. Scrivener raised an eyebrow. “I was attacked by someone who didn’t like it that we were still asking questions about the Landgraf’s daughter. He knocked me out and when I woke up I had been robbed.”

“You’re sure it was about the Landgraf’s daughter?” Scrivener asked skeptically. Losian glared at her and she held her hands up with a smile. “Just checking, just checking.”

“Did you find out anything more about mages attacking?” Losian asked.

“Not enough. There are rumours that several of the newly initiated mages have become sick, delirious. But I can’t get anything concrete. I even heard that Borgny contracted a fever and nearly died,” Gruthwin shrugged. “Someone’s hiding something.”

“I think we hit a nerve when we talked to the shopkeepers. I think we should keep the pressure on.”

“Why not talk to some of the silversmiths and traders?” Scrivener asked. “The shopkeepers didn’t seem to know anything concrete.” At Losian’s skeptical look she continued. “They seemed barely aware of the robberies and none of them recognized the medallion. It was either made here or it was brought from someplace else.” She started to play with her bracelets. The jangled softly as she seemed to consider something. “There was no makers mark on the medallions.” Losian looked surprised at her noticing that, he hadn’t. “How likely is it that a reputable silversmith will leave off his mark?”

Gruthwin nodded. “It’s illegal to make silver or gold jewelry without a mark or with a fake mark. But if the medallion’s are in some way illegal there would be a fake mark.”

“So there must be a trader who is bringing them in,” Losian said.

“Or a silversmith making them on the sly?” Gruthwin said.

“So we ask both,” Scrivener said.

Gruthwin frowned. “I don’t think you should be helping. It’s obviously getting more dangerous and the captain said you were an uncertified scrivener so you don’t have any protection at all.”

“Asking questions?”

“What he means is that scriveners are part of a sprigner team and have some protection from irate shopkeepers,” Losian said.

“And you’re not officially part of a team,” Gruthwin pointed out.

“And how would they know I’m not? Not unless you told them.” Scrivener grinned. “I’m having fun.”

Gruthwin goggled at her, causing Losian to laugh. “Being caught in a burning building or having a mage attack is fun?” Gruthwin asked.

Scrivener shrugged. “The wild is a little less tame,” she murmured. She picked up the bag that Gruthwin had left on the floor and threw it at Losian. “We need to get going. If they know you’re looking into things, they may cover their tracks.”

Losian struggled into his clothes. His back did feel better, much better. His head though still throbbed.

“Why did you end up here?” Gruthwin asked.

“The lock was changed.” Losian frowned. “I need to find out what happened.” His plants needed to be watered.

Chapters 9 and 10

Chapter 9

Losian woke from a nightmare of fire and mages and dead lilacs. Still half-asleep, he tried to get out of bed but collapsed onto his stomach; his back burned and his head pounded. He struggled to remember. Slowly he shook off the effects of sleep, piecing together what had happened. The fire and his fight with the mage was no dream. He didn’t remember being hurt but so much of what happened seemed fantastical. Losian lay there for a moment and then tried to move again, more slowly this time. He was successful in sitting up. His shirt had been removed and the cool morning air raised goosebumps along his arms and chest. He sat there on the side of the bed contemplating the floor. His mind was sluggish but he picked through what he remembered. His shield had been far more effective than previously. Maybe all that practice was finally paying off, although the price was still high. Was it practice or was it pushing his magic beyond that which he had thought he could do. He shivered as he remembered the feeling of that woman’s power sliding along underneath his own, like a deep river. It wasn’t that they had joined it was like she was carrying him, taking him by the hand, showing him what to do; the shield, the thorn plant and now moving objects. Could he do it again? He finally focused on a shoe. Could he move it?

There had been a time, long ago when using magic had been as effortless as breathing or maybe that had been a dream confused with his life before his mother died. He shook his head, everyone believed their childhood had somehow been magical. He stared at the shoe and then tentatively coaxed it to move. It slid along the floor towards the table. He waited his head still pounding, neither worse, and he grimaced, nor better. He lifted the shoe and it drifted along until it hit the chair near the table. He re-directed it and moved it around the room. Soon he started to feel exhausted, his head throbbing in beat with his heart, yet he felt a deep excitement. Had she done something. He realised abruptly that there had only been a little pain when he had cast the shield, before her voice had whispered to him, showing him how to move the dagger. Was that because she had done something earlier? Painful hope surged. He beat it down, crawling off the bed as he did. Ignoring the sharp searing in his back. Once he was standing he walked slowly to the large window that overlooked an alley. There was an iron balcony which were covered with plants, as was the window ledge. He carefully raised the window but couldn’t lean out because of his back. He contented himself with looking at each plant, touching them with his power to ensure they were healthy. The flowering grass needed water, but it always needed water. He could feel a hum from them that matched a consonance within himself. The headache receded, disappearing, mostly. It always did when he touched the plants. He smiled, which faded to a grimace as he reached up to shut the window ensuring that the climbing purple didn’t get caught. He shuffled over to the table, leaning against it as a wave of pain washed over his back.

There was a rap on his door and then it opened before he could say anything.

“You look better than I thought you would but you still look like crap,” Gruthwin said cheerfully, as he walked in carrying in a sack of something. “Scrivener said that the ointment would help the burns.” He put the sack down and pulled out a bottle. “I went to the infirmary at the mage’s college. That drink left for you reminded me of it. We use it if we’ve used more power than is safe.” He went over to the counter against one wall and inspected a mug there before bringing it back to the table and pouring the contents of the bottle into it. He shoved Losian into the seat and pushed the mug into his hands. “Here, drink this. I’ll put more ointment on your back.”

Losian, more tired than he realized slumped in the chair, being careful not to sit back, and stared into the mug.

“That’s one damn good apothecary. Your back looks way better than it did last night,” Gruthwin chatted away as he slathered the ointment over his back. Losian winced in anticipation but the ointment felt cool even through the tenderness of his skin. “Scrivener suggested you rest today. She said you’d best leave off your shirt until your back healed more.”

Losian turned his head slowly to look at Gruthwin. “Scrivener?”

“Yes, she and I brought you home yesterday. You don’t remember?”

“I remember. How is she?”

“She only had some mild burns. You were in bad shape though. What were you thinking going in there without backup?”

“I had the scrivener.”

Gruthwin snorted as he put the cover back on the jar. “Did you find out anything?”

Yes, Losian thought, I found out I could move things. “No. We’ll have to go to the morgue.”

“Jaraah is going to like that,” Gruthwin said sardonically. “But you’re not going anywhere today,” Gruthwin admonished.

Losian ignored him as he levered himself to his feet. The ointment was a marvel. His back felt better. He looked around for his shirt.

“I don’t know why I even bother. You’ll do what you want anyways,” Gruthwin grumbled. “What about the scrivener?”

“What about me?” Scrivener asked. She was standing in the doorway looking curiously around the room. She stared briefly at the plants. “Are you moving out?” Losian stared at her confused. “Your room looks sort of empty, like you’ve moved most of your stuff. Except the plants.” She nodded towards the window.

“No,” Losian snapped as he pulled his shirt over his head. He winced slightly at the pull across his back. “Let’s go.”

Scrivener shook her head but got out of his way as he walked determinedly out the door. He felt a little light headed but the draught that Gruthwin brought had made him feel much better. Scrivener touched his arm and then offered him a nut pastry. He took it, realizing he was hungry. In two bites it was gone and she silently offered him another.

The visit to the morgue was uneventful, except that this mage also had a lightening bolt medallion and his throwing knife was returned. Weakened as he was, Losian didn’t want to chance reading the medallion. That was something at least, a small break. But they had no idea what the medallion was for or who the mages were or where they had gotten them. He also had no idea whether the mages were connected to what he considered his real case, the murdered girls. He asked Jaraah to keep the medallion separate and not to touch it. He’d read it later when he felt stronger.

They arrived back at the dutyhalme just as the tidsang bells rang. The ferwardens he passed wouldn’t meet his eyes. A bad sign. Fiftigsman must be looking for a whipping boy, his favourite whipping boy, himself.

“What have you found out about the missing Landgraf’s child?” the captain started in on him as soon as he stepped into the room. “You haven’t spoken to the parents! By Cenor’s sword, do you know anything? The first thing you do is talk to the parents, assure them you’re devoting your full attention, not running around burning half the second radial down.”

“Hardly half,” muttered Losian. “Civic duty to clear out obvious hazards to pedestrians.”

Fiftigsman normally pale face deepened to red as he caught Losian’s mumbled comment. “You’ll go, now, immediately, to talk to the Landgraf Westmoreland. You’ll take your team and you will tell them this case has your undivided attention.”

Losian, too tired to argue, too tired to explain what they had discovered, or thought they had discovered and that perhaps there was a connection between the murders and the missing girl, turned on his heel and left the room and the dutyhalme. He stalked down the street, pedestrians darting out of his way. Gruthwin and the scrivener following in his wake like scavenger fish after a shark. No one spoke as they made their way to the Westmoreland residence, even the dray driver didn’t make any comments. By the time they got to the residence, Losian had himself back under control. He couldn’t recall every seeing the Landgraf or Landgraven but he’d just have to be circumspect.

This time they approached the front gate. “Spregman Losian to see the Landgraf and Landgraven,” he announced to the gate keeper, a young boy sitting on a stool just inside the gate.

The child left them standing outside while he went in to see if they would be allowed entry. He was back shortly followed by Hleafweard, the steward.

“Landgraf Bartold and the Landgraven Wildmara will see you now. Follow me,” he said as the child struggled to open the gate. Once it was open they followed him along the short path, winding through an elaborate garden. Small as it was, it was stuffed full of plants. Losian frowned, he could feel that they were too crowded, not enough space and not enough light. He looked up at the sky, well some of them had enough, other’s had too little. There were a few, he grudgingly thought, who might have enough. That they all looked healthy was a tribute to the Landgraf’s magic, land magic the sole gift which differentiated landgrafs from peasants and mages. Without it, they were not landgrafs. That was the primary denotative of the heir, that and the birth mark.

They were ushered into a small parlour, sparsely furnished, suitable for tradesmen, petitioners, and sprigners. Scrivener immediately moved to a chair as far from the door as was possible. She sat and fussed with her scrivener’s pouch, pulling out paper, sharpening the pencil. Her head down, her hair screening her face. Losian watched as Gruthwin wandered around the room looking at its decorations. He took up his position opposite the door, his hands respectfully behind his back, a bland look pinned to his face. They were not left to wait long which surprised Losian. In his experience Landgrafs liked people to be reminded of their relative, and lowly position, with respect to the landgraf.

“You are the spregman in charge of the investigation of my daughter. Have you found her? Have you found anything?” Westmoreland asked before he was two steps into the room.

Losian blinked his eyes. He hadn’t expected concern from the Landgraf. Behind him stood his wife. She stayed by the door watching her husband, only glancing once at the ferwardens.

“Yes, sirwan. We have a few questions. Is there anyone who would want to hurt you through her? Alliances? Revenge?” Losian asked, he let the accent of his birthplace colour his words.

There was a slight motion from the Landgraven but she let her husband answer. “No. There are no active enemies, none that would revenge themselves by using my daughter. It would not gain them anything,” the Landgraf said, “except to pain me,” he added. “I suppose that would be the point. I have not done anything, not for years that would cause someone to strike at me in that way.” He pursed his lips as he thought about that. “No, she is of no use to gain advantage.” Cruel as the words were, Losian knew they were true; women among the landgrafs were game pieces, moved for advantage or discarded as required.

Losian moved his attention to the Landgraven and something twinged. “Landgraven?” Wildmara was not a usual name for one from Landgraf lineage.

“My husband has spoken truly,” she replied coolly. Losian nodded unsatisfied. “Do you know of anyone who want to strike at your family?” he pressed.

“My husband has explained that there is nobody at this point.”

“But there may have been, or might be in the future?”

“How can we see the future Spregman. Power is seized when the moment is right.”

Losian could feel there was something there. but he couldn’t put his finger on it.

“We found the man who we think stole your daughter,” Gruthwin said. “He was a w..”

“Wild mage, as far as we can tell. Not registered with the mages’ guild,” Losian said, interrupting Gruthwin. “Unfortunately, he died in a fire when we were trying to locate him for questioning.”

Although the Landgraven face did not change, Losian could tell that she was disturbed. “I am sorry, we were not able to question him and find your daughter,” Losian said quietly.

“Step-daughter, ferwarden. She was my step-daughter and a sweet child.”

Losian kept his face neutral. She had sounded upset but not as if she truly cared about the child.

“Wildmara and I have been married several months. Ronja was my last child by my late wife,” the Landgraf’s voice was heavy with grief. “She was much like her mother, a sweet woman, a sweet child.”

Realizing  there was nothing further to ask, Losian bowed. “Thank you for your time sirwans. We are doing everything in our power to find your daughter and return her safely to your house,” Losian said.

The landgraf nodded and taking his wife’s arm left the room. Hleafweard who had been hovering in the background moved forward and escorted them out of the residence. The three were silent all the way back to the second radial. It wasn’t until Losian was sitting in the small cafe around the corner from the dutyhalme that he realized that he hadn’t heard Scrivener’s charms.

“Let me see the recordings,” Losian asked abruptly dismissing that for the moment. The scrivener, almost reluctantly, opened up the satchel and pulled out several sheets, mostly covered with writing. Losian, with Gruthwin looking over his shoulder examined the report. Scrivener had transcribed the interview verbatim. He nodded as he read through, except that unlike most scriveners, she had drawn pictures in the margin. They were excellent caricatures of the Landgraf and Landgraven. He frowned at them until he realised that she had caught his feelings about the two. The sketches of the Landgraf were mostly of a worried father. The ones of the Landgraven were more interesting. She seemed to loom behind her husband, a dark presence, nothing mother-like about her.

Chapter 10

Losian had no idea what to do next. Everything seemed to end in a blank wall. With nothing further to go on he decided that he would see why the Landgraven had disturbed both him and the scrivener. The first stop was Landgraf house where all the Landgrafs, their children and spouses’ information was kept. Lineage was supremely important to the Landgrafs. In the jockeying for political power, it was a potent weapon against an enemy or even more a friend. It did not take him long to find the book which detailed Landgraf Westmoreland’s family. What surprised him was that his second wife, Wildmara, was not from a Landgraf family but from a merchant family, a wealthy one at that. The merchant Hesbold was well known, owning half of Agen or so it seemed. Landgrafs were not known for being interested in trade which bothered Losian. They went next to the merchant guild.

The merchant’s guild was much more difficult, both get into and get information from. Unlike Landgraf house, which wanted others to know it’s place in the power structure, and, Losian thought sourly, be impressed by it, the merchants had no interest in letting others know about themselves. They knew knowledge was power and you never knew when some trivial piece of information could be turned into golds. Things did not go smoothly here. The clerk, an officious little man, kept them standing while he fussed over some papers and bowed and scraped to several merchants who were registering some complaint with the guild. They might have been there longer except Scrivener took matters into her own hands. She walked past the clerk and down a hall way. The clerk was after her like a shot with Losian and Gruthwin following him. She ignored his repeated calls, becoming more and more strident as she walked past several doors and stopped at the last but one. She rapped twice and then walked in. The clerk was almost apoplectic by this point and bounded in after her.

“Submaster Trivena, I apologize for the intrusion. I will call the guards immediately,” he said in horrified accents. He turned to grab Scriveners arms except the woman behind the desk was on her feet, her face split in a large smile.

“Elissa. May the gods smile on me even more. When did you arrive in Agen?” She turned towards the clerk and shooed him from the room. “Don’t worry. She is welcome. If I had known she was here I would have told you to show her in.” She closed the door behind him. “Really Elissa, it’s going to take me days to sooth the poor man.” She hugged the scrivener and then glanced at Losian and Gruthwin. “Friends?”

The scrivener laughed and shook her head. “Companions for the moment. I’m sorry to barge in on you like this but I need some information.”

Trivena smiled and raised an eyebrow. “It will cost you.”

“But of course. The western tribes have found a some more fire gems. I’ll send word that they should talk to your factor first.”

Trivena shook her head. “Child, child, you should bargain harder.”

Scrivener grinned. “What do you know about Hesbold and his daughter the Landgraven Wildmara.”

Trivena pursed her lips as her eyes flicked towards the ferwardens. Then back towards the scrivener. “It will not go further than this room?”

“You know my discretion,” Scrivener said.

“Yes but do I know theirs?”

“None will know that you told us,” Losian said.

“But some may question why the ferwardens and Spregman Losian himself came to see me.”

“You may complain about wedgren predation and they had brought a wedgren for you to question. Particularly as you lost that cargo a month ago,” Scrivener said.

Trivena laughed and nodded. “That was indeed a grievous blow.”

Losian wasn’t sure what that meant but it was obvious that the wedgren and the Submaster were content that the cargo should have been lost but that wasn’t why they were there.

Trivena sat down behind her desk and motioned for the other’s to seat themselves. Losian noticed that Scrivener did not take out paper.

“Hesbold is a canny merchant, and wealthy. He is know to deal in things which are of dubious legality but rare, very rare.” Trivena looked sharply at Losian and Gruthwin. ‘You understand I am not accusing him of actually smuggling. That the goods are special and thus fall outside of the traditional tariff schedule.”

Losian nodded and Trivena continued. “Wildmara is his only daughter. It was thought that she would marry into another merchant family, House of Grantir was most talked of so it was a surprise when she married Bartold Westmoreland.” Trivena paused, tapping her fingers on the desk top. “Bartold owed money to several merchants. He has not been the most astute investor and several of his projects went awry. One of them surprised me,” she continued frowning. “I believe that Wildmara brought a healthy influx of gold into the Landgraf’s house.” She looked at Losian, but he didn’t think she was actually seeing him and then shook herself, bringing her bright eyes to rest on him and then on the scrivener. “That is all I know.”

The scrivener nodded thoughtfully. Does house Hesbold trade any in the wilds?”

“I have heard that he has made some forays into the north and west, but that has not been his primary focus.” She looked quizzically at the scrivener. “Is there a problem there?”

Scrivener shrugged. “I have no idea, not yet at any rate. Thank you Submaster Trivena.”

“Any time, Elissa. Can you come for dinner while you are in Agen?”

The scrivener shook her head. “Not this visit.”

“Another time then.” Trivena ushered therm to the door and escorted them to the entrance hall way and watched them leave.

“You have some important friends,” Losian commented as they left. Scrivener shrugged. “She was a close friend of my father’s.”

Gruthwin’s stomach growled so they the three went to a cafe not fare form the merchant guild home. They sat down and scrivener pulled out some papers and added notes from their interview with the Submaster and then tucked them back. She looked around the cafe and Losian wondered idly how often she had actually eaten in one not withstanding she seemed to be well acquainted with a Submaster. Perhaps her father had been a lover? Wedgren men were reputed to be good in that area, if lax in most other’s including looking after their family.

“The baked ham and creamed potatoes are good,” he said abruptly. “My bill,” he added, all of sudden wondering if she had any money. Although her clothes were clean, they had been mended in a number of places. He supposed that all that jewelry could have been pawned for money and she certainly didn’t have the pinched look of someone worried about her next meal. “You’ll be paid at then end of second and fourth listesdag.”

She nodded and watched as the server came over to take their orders. Embarrassed because he could see the surprise, quickly hidden by Gruthwin, he ordered ham and potatoes for all three and ale. He had never eaten with Gruthwin, much less paid for a meal. He had avoided even the hint of socialization. The only time he had been to Gruthwin’s home was when he woke up after the fight in the alley, although Gruthwin had invited him to his home, and been declined every time. Losian, paused in mid-sip, how did Gruthwin know where he lived? He had never invited him and he avoided any discussion of even the area where his room was located. He swallowed quickly trying to decide whether he needed to find out how Gruthwin had known where to take him.

“Why do you think the child was taken?” Scrivener asked breaking the silence which was becoming more uncomfortable for Losian by the minute. “If the Landgraf is correct that he has no enemies what purpose could the mage have to snatch her?” She pushed the mug around the table, watching the moisture rings it made on the table. “If the new wife wanted her children to succeed then the boys would have to be removed first.”

Losian leaned back so the server could put his plate before him. “You’re right it doesn’t make sense. We need to go back to that house and see if there is anything left that can tell us who the mage was.”

Gruthwin grunted as he ate quickly. “Not sure if there is anything left. The fire was pretty intense.”

Losian picked at his food uncomfortably. “Maybe but we don’t have anything else.” He noticed that the scrivener ate quickly, but neatly. “Why would the mage in the alley attack us. It was before we were assigned to the missing girl. The only case we were working on was the murders. There must be a connection.”

“What kind of connection could there be between a Landgraf’s daughter and those poor girls?” Gruthwin said. “That doesn’t make sense.”

“I think we should stop by the dutyhalme and let the captain know that we’ve seen the parents,” Gruthwin suggested.

“And that our best suspect is dead?” Losian asked.

Gruthwin shrugged. “The captain will be expecting a report on our meeting with the Landgraf.”

Scrivener nodded her head slowly and Losian had no answer to that. “And you need to have some more salve but on your back,” she pointed out.

“Later,” he snapped but once Scrivener and Gruthwin were done, Losian threw some coppers on the table and surged to his feet. “Let’s go.”

Losian marched up the dutyhalme steps. He knew that Gruthwin and the scrivener were right. It made eminent sense, political sense, to let the captain know that they had obeyed his directive, even if it galled Losian to do anything the captain wanted.

The spregman’s room was busy. Four out of the six spregman were working on reports or talking to other teams. The Captain, as usual sat behind his pristine desk, marred only by the ubiquitous three pieces of paper.

“Losian, Gruthwin and scrivener,” Fiftigsman said standing up, with a piece of paper in his hand and walking slowly around his desk.

“We’ve just got back from talking to the Landgraf,” Gruthwin said quickly.

Losian didn’t like the look on the captains face.

“Yes, I heard that you were throwing all sorts of accusations around. Insulting the Landgraf and Landgraven,” the captain said with a nasty smile, descending from the dais and strolling towards the three. “You’ve pushed a little too hard this time Losian. Insulting a Landgraf and using an unauthorized scrivener,” he purred. “I think this case is too much for you, too important.” Fiftigsman looked at Losian and then Gruthwin. “A case less complicated might be called for.” He smiled as he held out the paper. “A series of smash and grabs has the merchants up in arms. Deal with it.”

Gruthwin stepped forward and took the paper looking at it with a slightly stunned look. “Smash and grab?”

Losian glared at the captain who smiled back, just barely containing his glee. “You’re off this case and those murders.” There was distinct distaste in his voice as he mentioned the murders. “And get rid of the wedgren.”

Gruthwin grabbed Losian by the arm and hustled him out of the building. “I didn’t think our interview had gone that badly. We haven’t done a smash and grab for years,” Gruthwin said nervously as he towed Losian out of the dutyhalme.

“Smash and grab?” Scrivener asked, trailing behind.

“Robbery, usually by a gang. They hit an area all at once and by the time the ferwardens are called they’ve moved on, “ Gruthwin babbled. “These cases are usually given to raw patrollers. This must be a difficult one.”

Losian pulled his arm away from Gruthwin and stalked down the street toward the shopkeeper’s ring. Gruthwin kept looking at Losian as they went, obviously worried by his silence.

“Hmm, the captain must think so highly of you two that he gives you the most difficult cases,” Scrivener murmured. “Particularly since Losian is such a favourite of the captains.”

“Shhh,” Gruthwin said.

Scrivener just grinned at him and skipped a little to catch up to Losian. “So what do we do first?”

Losian glared at her and then slowed down a pensive look on his face.

“What?” Gruthwin said. “I don’t trust that look,” he told the scrivener.

“Do you have a picture of the medallion?” he asked the scrivener. At her nod he smiled. “We can kill two birds with one stone.” He walked a few more paces. “Did you get a chance to talk to anyone about the bracelet?” he asked Gruthwin.

“I visited a few silversmiths but no one had made one like that, nor do they know of any one else who might have.”

“Made someplace else?” Losian mused. “There aren’t that many silversmiths.”

“The bracelet is not that different. Would they remember?” Scrivener asked.

Losian nodded. “You’re right. It could be a stock bracelet. But the medallion is not stock. Someone must have made it or sold it.”

“Losian,” Gruthwin protested.

Losian rounded on him. “Do you think anyone else can find the child? Or find justice for those women? Do you?” he snarled.

Gruthwin sighed but shook his head. “I guess it won’t hurt to ask the questions while we’re investigating the robberies.”

Losian nodded and walked ahead of them with more purpose in his step.

 

Chapter 7 and 8

Chapter 7

Losian, carrying Notir’s satchel, met Gruthwin early at the dutyhalme. He wasn’t surprised that the scrivener was missing; Wedgrens were known to be unreliable.

“What did you find out from the Landgraf?” Losian asked Gruthwin.

“She’s 13 and was out walking with her maid. The maid stopped to look at a hat in a shop window. The girl was gone when she turned back,” Gruthwin told him. “I’ve got a miniature. Taking little thing, blond, blue eyes.” He hunted through his pockets and pulled out a small picture, offering it to Losian. Losian didn’t take it, just looked at the picture.

“That was it? She was there and then gone? Which day?” Losian asked.

“Tewesdag, around ofernon. They weren’t sure what street,” Gruthwin said.

“Didn’t you talk to the maid?”

Gruthwin grimaced. “She’s dead. The Landgraf apparently was so furious with her that he ordered her executed.”

Losian winced. The landgrafs had the power of summary execution over their people on their land and somehow, this power had been extended to their residences in Agen. The ferwardens didn’t investigate deaths in a Landgraf’s residence unless the Landfurst ordered it. “Foolish,” he muttered. “Did you talk to the other servants? Maybe some of them knew which streets she liked.”

Gruthwin shook his head. “No one would talk to me. Afraid they’d be blamed.

Losian sighed. “I’ll talk to them,” he said as he walked into the sprigner’s duty room. Captain Fiftigsman wasn’t in yet. That was one of the reasons he liked to come the dutyhalme early. He threw the satchel on the desk. There was a commotion from the biddenrum.

Gruthwin peered out of the duty room to see what it was. “Let her through Heafman. She’s our new scrivener,” he called.

Losian ignored the scrivener as she walked into the room, the amulets wrapped around her skirt chiming softly. “So this is where the sprigners sit,” she called cheerfully. “Can’t say I’m impressed with the room.” She strolled around it as Losian did his best to ignore her, unbuckling the satchel, pulling out the contents to examine the pictures in more detail. He should have done it last night but he was tired and when he woke he had been too rushed to get to the dutyhalme to look. He paused as he watched her jump up onto the dais to look at the captain’s desk. “Get away from there,” he growled.

She grinned at him as she hopped down, sauntering over to where he and Gruthwin were standing. “What’s that?” she asked pointing at the satchel.

“The scrivener’s bag. It’s where you put all the drawings and recordings for an investigation. Once the investigation is over, the papers are filed in the back of the dutyhalme,” Gruthwin said.

The scrivener pulled a folded piece of paper out of her skirt and held it out. “From yesterday. Didn’t know what to do with it.”

Losian snatched it from her and carefully unfolded it. The drawing was only slightly smudged. “This is evidence,” he snarled.

Scrivener shrugged as she pulled the pile of papers towards her. Losian reached out to stop her, his hand hovered above the pile and then dropped to his side when she gave him a sharp look. “I presume the last scrivener did these?” she asked, as she leafed through the pile. She laid out the drawings of the three dead women looking at Gruthwin for an explanation.

“Those are the pictures of women whose death’s we’re investigating. They all died from lack of blood.” Gruthwin was using his court voice, a monotone which Losian knew didn’t do justice to what they had seen. They were really girls, although Jaraah had said they were technically women having had their first menses. There had been no marks on them to indicate how they had died. He supposed that losing all your blood meant you died but how the blood was let was not clear; no blood, no marks.

“You think mages are involved,” Scrivener said tapping the picture she had done. “Some sort of ritual?”

Losian nodded then shook his head. “I don’t know. The vision might have nothing to do with this.”

Gruthwin grunted as he examined the sketch. “Could you tell if it was cloth or something else she was lying on?” he asked Losian.

“It was red, like blood, but she didn’t appear to have a mark on her.”

“Like these girls?” Scrivener asked.

“There are a lot of rituals which require bodies and blood. Not all of them result in deaths,” Gruthwin said. “Sometimes a cloth is used which is saturated in animal blood. A woman’s body, um,” he looked distinctly uncomfortable, “is used without harm to the woman. It may have been a healing circle or something along those lines.” By this time his blush had spread down his neck.

“Oh, so they may have been healers?” Scrivener asked pertly.

Losian could tell that she didn’t believe, anymore than he did or Gruthwin for that matter. “We won’t know until we get more information and it might not have anything to do with our case.”

Scrivener gathered up the papers, making sure that their edges all aligned neatly. She peered into the satchel. “Clever, divisions,” she muttered as she slipped them into the satchel. She pulled the strap over her head so that the bag lay against her hip. “Where do I get more paper and a pencil?”

Gruthwin left and returned with what she required. She placed those in the satchel and buckled it. “Where to now?”

Losian ignored her question as he picked up his cloak and led the way out of the dutyhalme, turning towards the area in Agen where the landgrafs lived.

They walked quickly down the street until they found a dray stand. The three large dray horses were just pulling in to the loading area and Losian pushed his way to the front to ensure that he got on. He ignored the grumbling of the people that he shoved out of the way. The Efennes’ wheel of justice pin ensured that it’s bearer received preferential treatment on all public conveyances. The drivers hated them because they didn’t pay, but put up with it since they paid less ferthgeld because of this service.

Losian dropped onto the right hand bench seat with Gruthwin settling on one side and the scrivener just beyond him. The other passengers paid the driver and climbed warily over the ferwardens’ legs to settle further down the bench. Most had gone to the other side so they could avoid sitting near or even looking at the three of them. There were several comments about wedgren’s but he glared at the loudest mutterer which settled the rest down. The dray started with a lurch. Gruthwin  who knew better than to talk to Losian, slumped down and shut his eyes. Losian watched the scrivener over Gruthwin’s head as her head swiveled to try and see everything as they traveled out of the factors ring, through the crafters and the shops ring to finally arrive in the ring which housed the landgrafs. He wondered if she had ever seen residences that covered an area that a dozen shops might occupy further in towards the bay, not that she could see the residences which lurked behind the high walls and tightly closed gates.

The dray, which had made frequent stops on it’s way outward clopped down the street which ran behind the residences. A service that many, not all, landgrafs provided for their servants. It was cheaper to provide a source of transportation for servants  than provide shelter and food for them when not required. Losian finally stood and walked to the front, holding tight to a bar above his head running lengthwise down the wagon.

“Stop at the next residence,” he ordered the driver. He waited until the horses had been pulled to a stop before he jumped down, Gruthwin and the scrivener following.

“Who are we visiting?” Scrivener asked.

“Landgraf Westmoreland,” Gruthwin said. “His daughter has gone missing.”

“I’ll wait out here,” Scrivener said promptly. “No one wants a Wedgren in their house. Lighted fingered the whole lot you know.”

“You come with us and record everything that people say,” Losian growled. “That’s what scriveners do. You said you could write.”

“I can write. People may not be, um, comfortable, with me there,” Scrivener replied.

“You write and don’t touch anything. And if I clear my throat, I want you to mark what was said just before.”

She nodded slowly but looked confused. “He can tell when someone is lying,” Gruthwin told her in a low voice. “Handy. That’s why Fiftigsman doesn’t like him. Won’t talk to him at all, just yells.”

“Gruthwin.” Losian said warningly.

“She needs to know. And if he scratches his ear, mark that as a problem response,” Gruthwin said, unphased by Losian’s obvious displeasure.

Losian walked to the door in the wall and pounded on it. A small boy with a surprisingly deep voice, jerked it open demanding to know what he wanted. Losian took a closer look and realised it was an older man, a crook backed, dwarf of a man with a surly expression. Inevitably, having to deal with any of the door servants of a landgraf put Losian’s back up. They were, without exception, the most arrogant of any landgraf’s arrogant servants.

“We’re hear to talk to the Landgraf or the Landgraven, about their daughter,” Losian ordered.

The door servant tried to fill the door but Losian picked him up by the scruff of the neck and moved him aside so Gruthwin and the scrivener could enter. “I could have come by the front door, but I chose to be discrete. Don’t make me question that decision,” he growled. He dropped the man and started to walk up the paved path. All of the residences seemed to be designed in the same way. It was something Losian despised about them. They had no imagination. He rapped hard on the door and opened it without waiting for an answer, ignoring the gibbering of the door keeper trying to push through from behind.

They walked into an anteroom which led off in two directions, down stairs to where they could see cooks bustling about preparing food, lunch probably, and the other down a corridor which most likely led to the front of the house. He went down this corridor, interspersed by doors. He opened them as he went, along, only seeing storage rooms until he came to a room inhabited by a grey haired man behind a desk piled high with papers. The window set high on the wall filled the room with sunshine. The door keeper finally darted around them.

“Mansig Hleafweard, I could not stop them. He, they want to see the Landgraf or Landgraven.”

Hleafweard stood up, the sun glancing off his bald head. “You are?”

“Sprigner Losian, Mage Gruthwin and our scrivener,” Losian said briskly.

“I am Hleafweard, the Landgraf of Westmoreland’s steward. How may I help the ferwardens?” His bright black eyes, reminding Losian of a sparrow from his childhood home, darted at each one. They lingered longest on the scrivener’s bare feet, which did not surprise Losian.

“We’re investigating the Landgraf’s daughter’s disappearance. We need to talk to the servants and the Landgraf and Landgraven.”

“If it will bring back the lady Ronja, then I will arrange for that.” He motioned them to seats, which were leaning against the wall.

Gruthwin pulled two over to sit near the desk. Losian went to sit down when Gruthwin coughed and motioned for the scrivener to sit, but the scrivener moved over to the chair against the wall, pulling it slightly away and sat. Losian rolled his eyes and sat down. The scrivener already had her paper out.

“What do you want to know from me?” Hleafweard asked.

“Did the Lady Ronja always go out at the same time and with the same maid?” Losian asked.

“Laronda liked to take her out around ofernon, usually for a glass but sometimes two glasses. The child had instruction during tidsang.”

“Do you know if they always followed the same route?”

“You think that someone planned to steal the child? Who would? She is the youngest child. Her older siblings, particularly the eldest, a boy, would be the most likely target if they wished to strike at the Landgraf. She was not important.” Hleafweard said sadly.

“We must examine every angle,” Losian said, hating the pomposity of the phrase, true as it was.

“Do you know where she walked?” Gruthwin asked.

“The shop district in the first radial.”

“How long did the maid work for the Landgraf,” Losian asked.

“Laronda had been with her since she was a child. She was worried about what would happen when she became a woman. She didn’t have the skills to look after a woman of the Landgraf’s family.”

Losian and Gruthwin asked more questions but didn’t get more information.

“You wished to speak to the Landgraf and the Landgraven but both are out. Do you wish to wait or shall I arrange a time?” Hleafweard asked.

“I will let you know,” Losian said briefly. The other’s followed him out of the residence in silence.

Once they were clear of the residence Gruthwin slowed. “We are going to talk to the parents aren’t we?”

“If it’s necessary. Landgraf’s have very little to do with their children,” Losian said. Gruthwin opened his mouth to argue.

“Where are we going now?” The scrivener asked, diverting Gruthwin’s attention.

“The hat shop,” Losian said and strode away from the other two.

“We need to talk to the parents,” Gruthwin complained to Scrivener.

The first radial shops were not far so the three walked briskly to the start of the street then slowed down.

“What are we looking for?” Scrivener asked.

When Losian didn’t respond Gruthwin explained. “We might be able to see how she was taken.”

“It’s still early,” Scrivener pointed out. “It might have been easier when the street was more crowded.”

Losian winced. She was right but they didn’t have the time to wait around until ofernon. “You can come back and sketch the street,” he snapped.

The scrivener shrugged and slowed her steps even more to look into the shop windows they were passing. The shops were pretty much as expected. This far away from the river, which bisected the city, the shops were well kept, windows sparkling in the sun and the streets swept clean. Losian knew that the closer they got to the river, the meaner the shops would become with the streets becoming dirtier, the goods more tired looking until you ended up, right at the banks of the river with little hidey holes selling well-used clothes, some of which weren’t much better than rags, bruised fruit and spoilt meat, and lots and lots of shops where someone can sell something which they had ‘acquired’ for a fraction of the cost.

They reached the end of the street where the first arc became the second arc. There had been only one hat shop, a few doors away from the busy thoroughfare that demarcated the arcs.

“Go stand at the hat shop,” Losian ordered the scrivener. “Gruthwin, you go with her and then walk towards me.”

The other two positioned themselves and he watched as the scrivener looked in the window and Gruthwin walked slowly towards him. If the maid had really only looked for a brief moment there was no way the child could have been snatched. The shop next to the hat shop was a sweet shop. The child might have stopped to look in that window. He held up his hand and Gruthwin stopped. He beckoned and Gruthwin started again. The next shop was a silversmith, nothing there for the child to see. Gruthwin stopped beside Losian. The two looked up and down the street but the broad boulevard was wide open with no place someone could lurk waiting for a opportune moment.

Losian and Gruthwin walked back slowly to the candy shop. Scrivener joined them as the three stared into the window. The display showed a cornucopia of sweets; hard rocks, soft caramels, peppermint sticks, twisted licorice both red and black, the colours beckoning.

“She may have gone inside,” Scrivener commented. “Maybe someone spoke to her.”

Losian grunted and pushed the door open. Scrivener grinned at Gruthwin as they followed him. The shopkeeper, who had been arranging some candies behind the counter looked up as they came in. The scrivener leaned over the counter to poke at some brightly packaged candies.

“Leave them,” growled Losian.

Scrivener gave him a broad smile as she stood up, pulling out her papers she laid them on the counter, ostentatiously licking her pencil, ready to record.

“Two days ago a child was taken from the street. Did you she come in here?”

“A child, we get many children. You would have to describe her.”

“Lady Ronja, daughter of the Landgraf Westmoreland.”

The shopkeeper wiped his hands on his apron and shook his head, his jowls wobbling slightly. “Can’t say I recall.”

Losian leaned across the counter, his face close to the shopkeeper’s. “You lie. What time did she come in? Did she buy anything? Was she alone?”

The shopkeeper’s face paled. “She might have. I don’t recall.”

Losian tapped his check. “Maybe you should try harder. I hear that the trader sprigners are moving uptown. No one knows which shop they will check next.”

“I’ve paid my ferthgeld,” protested the shopkeeper, swiping at his forehead where beads of sweat had popped out.

“I know that, but do the trader sprigners?” Losian stepped back. “Thank you for your valuable assistance.” Losian turned and headed for the door. Gruthwin followed him. The scrivener took her time packing her papers away.

“No wait. I remember,” the man sputtered before Losian opened the door. “She did come in. There was a man with her.”

“Describe him,” Losian said, beckoning Scrivener closer. “In detail.”

“Tall, thin, black hair.” The shopkeeper was sweating profusely now. “Like her’s,” he said pointing at the scriveners.

“Short? Long?”

“Longish. Held back in a short tail.”

“Eyes?”

“I don’t know!”

“Hands, voice, nose.” Losian barked.

“Big hands, nose sharp, thin mouth. His mouth was thin and he barely moved it when he talked. He bought some licorice, red.” The shopkeeper moped his forehead. “They left through the back of the shop. Said he was in a hurry and he knew the alley behind was a shortcut to the next street over. Oh and he wore a bracelet, sort of like his,” the shopkeeper said pointing at Gruthwin.

“Sort of?”

“Well it didn’t look the same. It was silver though, yes, silver because it glinted when he paid for the licorice. I wouldn’t have seen it at all except for that.”

“Like this?” Scrivener asked, proffering the sketch she had done. The shop keeper nodded his head vigorously up and down, his jowls almost flapping.

Losian asked variations on the questions but got no more.

Chapter 8

Scrivener unwrapped a candy as they walked down the street. “Where did you get that? No don’t tell me,” Losian snarled as he grabbed the candy from her.

Scrivener grinned at him as she pulled another from her pocket. “Do we stop for lunch?” She asked as the middag bells started to ring.

Losian decided to ignore her. Gruthwin glancing at Losian replied. “Not here. Can’t afford the prices here, but there’s a nice little cafe near first radial’s dutyhalme. Not too expensive,” Gruthwin said hopefully.

Losian shrugged. “And the owner is pretty,” he said enjoying Gruthwin’s blush.  “Not that it will do you any good,” Losian continued ruthlessly.

Scrivener looked from one to the other. “Mages can’t marry. Poor sods.” Losian said bluntly.

“It’s not that we can’t, it’s that we have to get permission and it has to be another mage and,”

“And there are few female mages. That’s one of the reasons I’m glad I’m not a mage.” Losian waved down a dray.

“We’ll get a bite from the street vendor near our dutyhalme,” he said as three men, junior clerks by their clothes, got up from the seat and moved towards the back of the dray.

The three sat down but did not talk until they reached the stop near the dutyhalme. The two men bought sandwiches, slices of fried meat on slabs of bread. Scrivener fished out a package which contained bread and cheese from one of her pockets. After they were finished Losian frowned down the street towards the station. “We need to find the man. Or at least someone who has seen him.” He turned away from the dutyhalme. “Can you make some copies of the sketch?” he asked the scrivener.

“Now?”

Losian nodded. She looked around for someplace smooth to draw on. Not finding something she squatted down at the edge of the wooden sidewalk, laying a stack down to act as a buffer and then a blank piece of paper on top. She sketched quickly. “Two?” At Losian’s nod she did another and handed one to Gruthwin and the other to Losian. “What now?”

“If he’s a mage, and the bracelet would indicate that, maybe one of the shopkeepers who sell to mages will know him,” Losian said.

“A silver bracelet does not make him a mage,” grumped Gruthwin. “I know. Mages wear them” and he pulled his sleeve back to show a twisted silver band. “But that didn’t sound the same.”

Losian nodded and thought for a bit. “It would explain why the child would go with him. Some sort of compulsion spell. But why would he take the girl? There’s been no ransom request.”

“Not that we know,” Gruthwin pointed out.

Losian shrugged. “Maybe. Check the shops anyways.”

Gruthwin nodded. “And what will you do?”

“I want to see if anyone knows when that last murdered girl was seen.”

“Losian,” Gruthwin said warningly. “The captain said…”

“I know what the captain said. I’ll ask around and then Scrivener can take me to where wedgrens can be found. Maybe someone there has seen him.”

“Wedgrens would not snatch children off the street. Just because that scared rabbit said that doesn’t mean he was a wedgren. Anyone with black curly hair is called wedgren,” Scrivener snapped.

“It’s what we have,” Losian said. She was right, he knew. That hair was uncommon in non-wedgrens but not out of the question. He looked at Scrivener as he thought about hair and eyes. He had his father’s features including his father’s eyes but he wasn’t like him at all. His brother though looked like his step-mother but was like his father through and through. Scrivener had grey eyes, not the usual black of a wedgren. He hadn’t noticed that before. Her hair had caught his attention. The shear amount of it was surprising; long, down passed her hips and curly. He wondered if she every combed it, whether a comb could even get through it. Her eyes were startling, below those dark eyebrows which arched finely above them and the nose. He didn’t know if it was a typical Wedgren nose but it was clean, the lines attractive, nostrils delicately flared. The face looked proud, disconcertingly so below that mass of unruly hair.

“I know the wedgrens in this city, and none of them would steal a child,” Scrivener insisted.

“You may be right, but we have to check everything,” Gruthwin said placatingly.

Losian shrugged. Everyone was capable of anything.”You might as well give me the picture of Ronja,” he asked Gruthwin.

Gruthwin pulled it out of his pocket and handed it over to Losian who shoved it in his pocked before gesturing for the scrivener to precede him. With a huff she started walking in the direction he wanted to go. They traveled in silence, the tap of his boots a background noise, her feet silent. Losian wondered idly how she could stand to walk through the city without shoes. He shuddered thinking of the things she must step in, although now that he was noticing, he realised that she didn’t walk in a straight line, carefully navigating around piles of refuse and skipping lightly over others. They finally reached the neighbourhood the last body had been found.

Losian then slowed down, stopping at shops and stalls along the way having the scrivener show the picture of the dead girl. No one recognised her.

“She may have been left here,” Scrivener suggested.

“I’m aware of that. But since no one has come forward about missing her, she could be from anywhere.”

“What was she wearing?”

“What? I don’t remember. Why?”

“Well, maybe we could identify where the garment came from,” Scrivener suggested.

“What good would that do. The clothes were probably second hand or third or fourth. They would have passed through so many hands that it would be useless.”

“Where are they?” Scrivener persisted. “It can’t hurt for me to look at them.”

Losian shrugged. He recognised an exercise in futility that the questioning of this area had become. He changed directions and took her towards the morgue. Instead of going in the door where the bodies were kept, he walked down a few paces to a worn door off an alley, knocking briskly. “Rog, it’s Losian, open up,” he yelled.

“Hold on, I’m coming,” replied a voice. The door was dragged open and an old man peered out. His hair was a dirty grey, matted mess, that flopped around a filthy face. At least Losian thought it was filthy. It could be that his mottled skin was the result of a sickness or something. It never seemed to get dirtier. Rog grinned, his tongue protruding from his mouth with no teeth to keep it in, like a fat pink maggot. “What you want?”

“The last woman I brought. Her clothes,” Losian said shortly. He hated it here. The room smelt of desperation, all that was left after death. It was filled with a jumble of goods; clothing, shoes, cloaks, hats. “If someone doesn’t claim the body, they’re wrapped in a shroud, buried in the paupers field and their goods are left here. After a bit, if no one claims them, they’re sold,” Losian said to the scrivener as he picked his way around a pile of what looked like rags. “Some of these things can’t find a buyer. Well where are they?” he almost snarled at the wizened man.

“This way Sprigner, your honourship.” The old man motioned them down another aisle towards the back. “Her clothes were better, much better. Barely worn.” He stopped in front of a pile and dug around in it, finally coming up with a dress.

Losian snorted, if he thought this dress was barely worn, he’d hate to see what the old coot thought was worn. The scrivener took the dress from the man and looked it over very carefully. She shot a look at Losian, with an almost imperceptible nod towards the old man. “We’ll let ourselves out,” Losian told him. The old man stood a moment but finally shuffled away.

The scrivener turned the clothes over and he saw that there was a maker’s label on the inside. “This was made for someone. Probably not your woman. But if we knew who it was we could find out where she sold it?”

“And what would that tell us?” Losian asked impatiently.

“What radial she lived in.” The woman moved on to the undergarments, dirty white, the chemise yellow under the arms. She turned them over and then looked at Losian.

“What?” he asked the scrivener impatiently.

“You read the mage’s medallion.” Losian nodded slowly. “Can you read the clothes?”

Losian shook his head. “Not enough emotion.”

“How did you know the medallion was useful? How do you know that these clothes aren’t?”

“They’ve been handled too much. The medallion,” he shrugged. He couldn’t put into words what he felt as soon as he touched the medallion. The clothes didn’t have that feel.

“Have you tried?” Scrivener persisted.

Exasperated Losian picked up the dress. Scrivener took it away from him and put the chemise in his hand. He looked at her.

“It’s the last thing whoever killed her would take off.”

Losian nodded. He held it letting his gift range over it. There was nothing. He balled it up when he got a glimpse. He looked down at a mended rip, a small tear carefully repaired. He looked closer and noticed that most of the needlework was slap-dashed. This, though, was carefully done and recent. The thread was not as grubby. He rubbed his thumb along it. She was standing, shivering in a room in just her chemise, her fingers stroking the repair. He could feel her concern that the man wouldn’t keep his promise. He could hear water somewhere running and the walls had mould. His sight began to dim and he dropped the clothing, grabbing his head. He was lowered gently to the ground and someone was kneading his neck. He sat there until the headache started to recede. He turned his head slowly to see he was sitting against a table with the scrivener beside him rubbing his neck. Her fingers were strong and he could feel the knots in his neck unraveling beneath them.

“Does that always happen when you do that?” Scrivener asked. Losian could only detect a mild interest in her voice.

“Yes. That’s why I don’t like doing it often,” he said pushing her hands away and getting to his feet slowly. The room whirled and then steadied. She scrambled to her feet after him, obviously concerned, the chiming from her clothes, soft as it was, irritating him. “I’m fine,” he snarled at her. He didn’t need her fussing at him. “What did you get down?”

The scrivener showed him what she had drawn. He was amazed at the detail, far more than any other scrivener.

“You were very detailed,” she said defensively, misinterpreting his look.

Losian grunted. He examined the room in the picture. “Must be near the river,” he muttered. He shoved the paper back at her and she tucked it away in the satchel. “Let’s go find out where you wedgren’s meet,” he growled. The scrivener shrugged and followed him out of the building.

Once outside he waited for her to lead the way. She stood there for a moment thinking, then led him down the street towards the trader’s arc. They walked along in silence until they came to a narrow alley which she turned down and then stopped at a small, dingy, tavern. If it had been dark he would never have seen it so grey and miserable did it look.

“Let me do the talking,” the scrivener said. “No one will talk to you.”

“Because I’m with the ferwardens?” he asked sardonically.

“No, because you’re not a Wedgren. Too many of us are accused of things we haven’t done to trust strangers,” Scrivener said as she opened the door.

Losian followed her in. The room was cramped, with a low ceiling and plenty of chairs and tables. It was brighter than he had anticipated with walls which were whitewashed clean, unlike the outside of the building. The lights, scattered around the room, were barely smoking. Scrivener walked to the counter, rapping on it once she was there.

“An ale for me and a glass of white for my friend here,” she called.

“I’m not your friend,” Losian hissed. She smiled at him as she searched through the satchel for the picture of the most recent dead woman and the mage. She then held out her hand to him. “The picture,” she said patiently. He gave it to her leaning against the counter looking around the room.

It was full of dark haired patrons, although he noticed none had scriveners grey eyes. The drinkers all watched him covertly as he waited for the barkeep to bring their drinks.

“Have you seen either one of these women, or this man?” she asked as she fished out some money from one of her pockets.

Losian turned back to take the glass. He had no intention of drinking it. The gods only knew what was in it. He took the smallest sip and was surprised enough to stare into the glass. He could tell that the scrivener was amused but she kept her eyes on the barkeep, sipping her ale.

“Can’t say as I have,” the barkeep said. “That hair now, that’s an old style.” He took the picture and walked around the counter approaching an old man near the hearth.

Losian moved to follow but the scrivener grabbed his arm, holding him still. She shook her head at him so he settled back to wait. The barkeep returned, handing the picture back to scrivener. “There was a tribe that wore their hair like that. No one’s heard much for a while, long while.”

Scrivener frowned at that. “Name?”

“He doesn’t remember. They stopped coming to the assemblies, sudden it was he says.” He looked over the other two pictures and shook his head. “Don’t know either of these.” He pushed the pictures back towards the scrivener.

Scrivener smiled and thanked him. She quickly finished her ale and strode towards the door. Losian gulped the rest of his wine catching her as she left the tavern. “We’re not leaving yet. I can get more out of him,” he said.

She shook her head. “You really think that they’ll tell you more? By the time you’re through the door, the old man will be gone.”

“I should have talked to him before we left,” Losian insisted.

“I’m not having you badgering one of mine,” she snapped.

“So he’s a wedgren,” Losian pointed out.

“Was. Maybe. The tribe is no more,” she replied. She slowed down a bit, thinking. “There might be another place. It’s not somewhere I want to go but I have heard that those wedgren who are banished sometimes go there.”

“Let’s go.”

“It’s dangerous.”

“I’ll send a note to Gruthwin. He’ll meet us there. Someone might warn the mage.”

“No one will warn him.”

Losian took her by the elbow. “We’re going. Where.”

“Near the old docks, Chandlers Way, I think,” she said.

Losian squashed the spurt of excitement. There had been the sound of water in his vision. The two cases were starting to come together or it may be a coincidence. He wouldn’t trap himself into either way. Losian wrote a quick note in his pad, tore it out and looked around for a boy. There were always boys looking to make a copper or two. He found one and promised that Gruthwin would give him two coppers on receipt of the note. Once that was done he started off towards Chandlers Way. It took them a quarter of a glass before they arrived at the top of the street. It smelt of rotting matter, a fuggy scent of old fish, decomposing meat and shit. Losian tried not to breath too deeply as they walked down the street. Scrivener was looking carefully at the buildings as they went, the chiming of her skirts as she double stepped or hopped to avoid the muck the only sound. She stopped before one whose front stoop was set at a crazy angle. The steps tilted alarmingly with two having boards missing. The door was the only intact piece in the whole building. The windows were either boarded up or broken and the lath work of the walls could be seen easily.

“I think we should wait for Gruthwin and maybe a patroller or two,” Scrivener said.

“Nervous? It’s not dark yet,” he said starting up the stairs. “We’ll just take a quick look. It doesn’t appear that anyone lives here.”

Scrivener followed him up the stairs and stood behind him as he pushed the door. There was no handle to turn. He had to lean hard before it began to move.

“I don’t think we’ll find anything here,” she said nervously.

Losian stepped through the door and walked into a large room, empty except for a pallet against one moldy wall like his vision. “She was here,” Losian said, excitement drawing him further into the room.

There was a noise off to his left and he turned to see a man, very similar to the picture step out of another room. Losian dropped his remaining throwing knife into his hand and had it flying towards the mage. The mage flicked his hand and the knife flew harmlessly by him, but Losian pulled his belt knife wishing for his lost throwing knife and launched himself against the mage hitting some sort of obstruction. A charm flew past his ear, hitting the barrier as well but it was closely followed by a knife which pierced it. Losian got to his feet, to see the mage jerk the knife from his shoulder and drop it but his hand was bloody. Losian smiled grimly; the charms weren’t just for aural effect and she didn’t depend on them alone. The mage flicked some of the blood away and laughed, making a gesture which picked Losian up and threw him against a wall. He landed hard, slightly dazed. He saw that Scrivener had also hit a wall and was lying crumpled on the floor. A wash of anger drove him to his feet and he flung himself once more at the mage, his belt knife clutched in his hand. He muttered the only defence spell he knew, a shield. The next attack from the mage slowed, but it still drove Losian to his knees, his shield, surprisingly, protecting him. Losian didn’t have the energy to get to his feet. Holding the shield was taking all his strength. The next attack shivered the shield he had erected. He prayed that Gruthwin would get there soon. The Mage took a step forward, as he attacked again. Losian’s head began to pound and his eyesight narrowed to a thin wedge, like looking through a crack from using his power. Another attack followed quickly and Losian could feel his shield disintegrating. Then the voice was there, the woman’s voice. “Behind him. Can you move your dagger, the one behind him.”

Losian carefully turned his head slightly until he could see his throwing dagger, lying on the ground. He pushed and it moved. He needed to pick it up not just push it. The Mage threw another bolt, this time fire, at Losian and it splashed against his barrier, or hers. He pushed again and then, like the last time, she slid along underneath his power, showing him how to lift it, aim it. The barrier shivered and the fire sheeted around it. The room was beginning to fill with smoke. Sweat was pouring down his face, from heat or effort or both, he had no idea. He could barely breathe. “That’s it, just a little higher. Good. Now, hard, push hard.”

Losian pushed and pushed and there was a scream and his head seemed to split and then he blacked out. He didn’t know how long he was out but he opened his eyes, streaming with water. He coughed and took in a lungful of smoke. He managed to get to his knees. The room was filled with flames. Scrivener, where was she? He looked and saw she was still against the wall. He crawled over. Just as he got there there was a crack and part of the ceiling came down. He threw himself over her and a beam fell hard, the wall keeping it from crushing the two of them. For a moment he thought they were done when he heard someone bellowing his name. Gruthwin!

“In here, we’re in here,” he yelled and then started to cough, wracking cough after cough. He couldn’t get out anything more. Then Gruthwin was there, using a shield to keep the fire away from him. He crouched down and pulled at Losian’s foot. Losian jerked his foot free and wiggled around to push Scrivener towards him, the satchel, protected by her body snagged for a moment but came free. “Take her. I’ll follow,” he rasped and did. Gruthwin put her down on the sidewalk outside and scrambled up the stairs to grab Losian,dragging him down the stairs and out on the street. The house gave a shudder and then caved in.

“Damn you, man. You should have waited!” Gruthwin raged at him. He went back to turn Scrivener over. “She’s still breathing. No thanks to you. What were you thinking? She hasn’t been trained.” Gruthwin was furious. Losian couldn’t remember seeing him that angry before.

Scrivener starting coughing and then struggled to sit up. Gruthwin helped her. She sat there for a moment then looked around, relaxing when she saw the satchel beside her. She pushed Gruthwin away gently so she could stand up. “Thanks Gruthwin. I think,” she coughed some more, “I’ll be fine. Losian?” Gruthwin jerked his head towards Losian. Scrivener walked over to look at him. “You’ve got some bad burns,” she murmured looking him over. “Time to get you home I think.” Her accent was thicker than what he remembered. The voice had no accent, no not quite. It was like his grandmother’s. Just a hint of the north. Not the thick eastern one Scrivener had.

“I’m fine,” he muttered, trying to stand. Swaying he could see her smudged face showed her disbelief. Once he was up, she slid her arms around his waist. “Lean on me. We’ll take you home.”

Nope, not Chapter 7

I was on a roll, churning out chapters right up until chapter 10 and then the wheels started to get wobbly. Missed several days and tried to push the wheels back on. For those of you who ended up not knowing what all those chapters were about I had started on the epic journey called NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month). It happens every November and you have to write 50,000 words in that month.

THEN I started to drive from Toronto to Victoria BC with my daughter who has just been posted there from Halifax. She picked me up in Toronto and we drove to Ann Arbor to visit my niece and then on to spend the day in Chicago, 3 hours in Minneapolis, a night in Winnipeg, sleep in Regina (where she was sick),  sleep in Medicine Hat, wander around Calgary, two nights (poor child was sick again) in Banff where I got to do the hike and she stayed in bed, on to Kamloops where the morning presented us with a magnificent vista of hills, on to Vancouver and the ferry and dinner in Victoria with my nephew and his wife.  I rested on Friday and flew  home on Saturday. Whooo, it was great and amazing with little gems of adventures and meeting people.

And the 50,000 words? Well I thought I would be clever and just bring my tablet and keyboard. I was using scrivener so I copied all the chapters to dropbox as RTF files and checked to make sure they were available on the tablet. Everything good to go. I would write while she drove, wrong. The first thing is that dropbox on the tablet wouldn’t let me access the files without an internet connection. Ok, first stop I copy all the files onto the tablet. Good to go again, not.

The word processor on the tablet wouldn’t open RTF files. Now that is stupid. So again wait until we stop, find a word processor that will open RTF files. Now we’re good to go, sort of.

Since I’m writing on the fly, I sometimes have to go back and add something to an earlier chapter so that it makes sense. Except that this word processor only allows one file open at a time, grrr. Then I have files with character descriptions and to look at them means that I have to save and close the file I’m working on, grrr. So I copy all the chapters into one big file. Good to go again, not.

There was a certain amount of angst as I lost lots of words before I realized I had to save the stupid thing even to go to the home page of the tablet.  Ok, so now I think I’ve got it wired, nope. Just opening the program takes multiple attempts so finally in disgust I look for another word processor (again after we stop so I have an internet connection). I finally locate one that will not only open RTF but says it will open and save files as DOC files. Get it, open my story and I’m good to go, YES.

The story was done on the 28th and I wrote 50,360 words. Even gave it an ending!.

So you’ll get chapter 7 + in my next blog post.