State of my nation 2

March was busy. I had sent my manuscript Beast Master to a copy editor and I got it back in March. I stared at the link for a few days, fearful of what I would find. It had been such a gruelling exercise when I sent it to the editor that I was worried about what she would say. Never having had a copy edit done, I was unsure what would happen. Finally I girded my loins and opened it. On first glance, it looked like a lot of edits. Sigh, what do you expect? Grammar and spelling were never my strong suit. To complicate matters, I had so many unique words, names, places, that the spell check was useless and the grammar check and I didn’t always agree.

I tentatively stared to review the comments, hmmm, a comma is missing. Oh, another comma. Oh a third. It seems to me that the vast majority of my problem was commas. Ha, that was a relief. There were a few grammatical errors, not many. There were a few sentences which were confusing and once I had misnamed a character. I was ecstatic over that one. Have you ever read a book, a printed, supposedly copy edited book and found that an important characters name had changed part way through? You go back and forth to check and sure enough some one didn’t catch that problem. I am so glad that that one mistake was picked up.

The comments were thoughtful and, I think, have improved the readability of the book.

Now, if I can just finish the sequel I can finally publish Beast Master.

 

State of my nation

It’s been a while since I posted anything. Why? you ask. Because I’ve been busy on a number of fronts. I was skiing at Monte Sainte Anne at the beginning of March. We in Ontario have had a definite snow drought. My husband and I like to snowboard in Ontario and there was so little snow that many places didn’t open until after Christmas, and then they closed early. Hard on those places. Christmas and March break are where most of those places make their money. Opening late cut into their Christmas season. Then there was next to no snow in January so if their is no snow, people don’t think about skiing or boarding so they don’t go, even though there is man made snow. There was snow in February, but not enough and too late. Then there is a thaw and then March break and well, most of those resorts will be carefully reviewing their finances, hoping to find some savings to allow them to open next year.

But I digress and that is Ontario. Monte Sainte Anne is in Quebec. They had enough snow after Christmas for some decent skiing but then in February, all the snow that was meant for Ontario fell on this one mountain. There was so much snow that they were able to stay open into April. All the runs and the glades were open in April on the south side which is amazing and it all was because of the February snow falls. We went at the beginning of March and it was great skiing, glades, moghuls and groomed runs to soar like a bird on.

So that was February, March is up next.

Gravitational Waves

My husband came home last night all excited. He had read an article in the Guardian that Gravitational Waves had been discovered. This is, apparently, the last unproved idea from Einstein.

What are gravitational waves you ask? The Globe and Mail had a good analogy. Below is a their explanation from the article:  http://www.theglobeandmail.com/news/world/einsteins-gravitational-waves-detected-in-scientific-milestone/article28713410/

Ripples in space

The key to understanding gravitational waves is to forget the idea that gravity is an invisible force of attraction between two massive objects. Instead, picture the space around those objects as curved in a way that causes them to move together.

The curvature of space cannot be seen, but its effects are obvious. Think of a bowling ball sitting on a trampoline. The weight of the bowling ball deforms the stretchy trampoline surface, creating a dip. Put a second bowling ball on the trampoline and the two balls naturally roll toward each other until they touch, forming a bigger dip. Click! That’s gravity in action, with the trampoline representing space.

The gravational wave came from two black holes colliding. Black holes can’t be seen because space curves so badly around them that light can’t escape and if it can’t escape we can’t see it but now it can be heard (it is a wave!).  Their collision which took place 1.3 BILLION years ago was detected. Like a stone in a pond, the wave propagated through space and across time to reach two, not just one but two, listening posts.

“Hmmm,” you say, “but what exactly does that mean to me?”

Good question and I don’t know what it really MEANS. I barely understand it. But as the article says this is as big a deal as when Galileo turned his telescope to the heavens for the first time. Look where we are now and we wouldn’t be there without that craving to understand what is around, above and below us. So I am really excited about where this will lead us – into the unknown and speculative fiction which has been talking about harnessing the power of black holes for years will be all over this.

Final, almost, step

There are so many steps to publishing a manuscript. Write the thing. Review the thing. Get alpha readers to review the thing. Send it to an editor. Get a book cover done. Tackle the edits. Review it AGAIN! Send it to a copy editor. Tackle those changes. Review it as an ePub. Decide where it will be available. Market the thing. And I am sure I’ve left out some steps.

So which step am I at? I’ve sent my manuscript, Beast Master, off to a copy editor. Hurrah!

What steps have I covered? I’ve had alpha readers read it.  I’ve reviewed it.  I’ve had it edited. I have reviewed the edits. I have a cover. I have a blog and a web site (that’s the marketing thing) so I’m down to the last few steps.

I am very, very curious to see what the copy editor has to say. I hope that it will take less time to tackle her changes/suggestions than for the editor. That was a very difficult exercise, but worth it.

I still want to get the first draft of  book 2, In the Blood of the King, finished before I actually do the publishing. I’m about 1/3rd of the way through it. So I need to buckle down and get it finished so I can go through all those steps again with it. Oh joy!

Research

I am reading  Wellington, The Path to Victory 1769-1814 by Rory Muir, a biography of the Duke of Wellington. Wellington himself didn’t interest me but I realised that I knew nothing, and I mean absolutely nothing about waging a war. If I am going to have fighting in my books then I needed to understand war fare and battles to make them at least half way reasonable. Thus, when I stumbled across the above biography I thought I’d read it.

I always knew about Wellington. He was the hero of Waterloo, the final defeat for Napoleon, another great warrior.  The book has been an interesting combination of analysis of campaigns and sketchy details on Wellington’s life.  Logistics, logistics, logistics!!! Seize the moment! Care for and have faith in your soldiers but protect the civilians. And don’t forget the bigger picture – every battle is but one moment in a war and the purpose is to win the war.

This has suited me because the campaigns are what interest me. But, I have to admit, it is a little disconcerting to have so little personal characterisation. I suppose that is the difference between a biography and fiction. In fiction you can create a person with all their virtues and vices, make them real. Sometimes they are so real that you forget they are an invention of someone’s imagination. In a biography, you are confined to what you can glean from letters to, from and about the subject or from newspapers, reports and stories. And the reports, stories and letters all have to be taken with a grain of salt. It makes the reading a little slow. There is no tension. The hero’s journey is muted. The vital link between reader and character is not there.

Which is why I prefer fiction, historical or fantastical – I connect with the character and live vicariously through them.

Not withstanding the above, after I finish this book, I think I’d like to read about campaigns waged by other famous generals – Julius Caesar, Hannibal,  Alexander the Great, Rommel, etc. And I really, really ought to read the Art of War by Sun Tzu.

Winter – Yaaa!

I ski. My family skis. Consequently, we love winter. It has been depressing until this week when finally, finally! the snow has come. There was a little just before Christmas, but not enough to withstand the warm spell and rain. RAIN – what an awful weather event. Rain in winter is like a cold snap in July. Barely faced with equanimity. But I digress. It has finally cooled off, the snow has fallen and there is hope that my husband and I can get out on our snowboards. Yes, I know I said we ski, but since we live in southern Ontario, skiing is pretty boring.  When we travel more than two hours north of the city we ski (snobs that we are) but when we want fun on the slopes close to home we pull out the snowboards.  The weekend is looking good. Saturday will be a little warm, 0 c, but Sunday appears to be more seasonal at -6 c.

Quoting temperature is all well and good but the problem is that you have to figure out not only what clothing to wear but also what your body is used to. I really like it when the temperature slowly drops through the fall and into winter. You get used to cooler and cooler temperature, adding a scarf here, a sweater there until you have the perfect combination of clothing for the outside temperature. When the temperature goes up too much the body immediately re-acclimatises itself to the warmer temperature and forgets all about the cold and you’re back to square one.

Except that square one is significantly cooler than before.  No easing into the temperature. Nope, the body has betrayed you and it shivers away at 5 c, where before the warm snap it would have been happy at that temperature. Now, the problem is you end up either under dressing or over dressing.  I hate sweating inside a heavy coat and NOT being able to take it off because then all that sweat will freeze!  Undoing it, removing hats, mitts, scarves, just won’t work if the coat is too heavy. Wait, I hate being under dressed. Huddled into the coat, head pulled down like a turtle to keep as much of the warmth in as possible, shoulders sore and stiff from hunching, back sore and stiff from shivering. Hands thrust into pockets, arms tight against the body. All the muscles locked down, but still you shiver. Jaw clamped tight to keep from chattering.  The core has to be kept warm, and the body knows that. You try to relax, to drop your shoulders, ease your jaw but that doesn’t last. The body wrests control from your mind and everything curls in towards the core to keep it warm.

Both are pretty bad, but freezing is worse so, paranoid about being cold, which ruins a day of skiing or boarding, I end up taking everything with me. The car looks like a clothing sale table. Sweaters, scarves, mitts, gloves, even another pair (lighter?, heavier?), of long underwear. Thank goodness for cars. If I had to put all my choices into a bag, I’d never be able to carry it! Then I get there, get out of the car and generally go with what I though was right initially, leaving behind all the extra stuff. I guess, those additions were my security blanket.

But then, as is often quoted in our family, there is no bad weather, only bad clothing choices.

 

 

 

 

Description

I decided that it might help my trouble with description if I practiced writing descriptive paragraphs. I started by first writing a description of a character and then writing a physical description of a location. Like most things, it went slightly awry. I found that my physical descriptions became poems.  I wrote poetry long, long , long before I wrote prose.  During what seems like a different life. I tried to get back to it just before I started to write prose but it wouldn’t come. Well, now it is coming. Below is one of the pieces with the picture which inspired it.

WPFan Bridge Paddington Basin London UKThe slow descent, rib slowly meeting rib,
Spaces between shrinking, shrinking, excruciatingly slow,
Steel planks, grey in the grey day, graceful in their fall.
Buildings behind, distanced by
Spines breaking solid lines, the fixed across,
Breaking the soaring up by
The geometric precision of the closing fan.
At rest now, the buildings loom above a simple bridge.

Fan Bridge Close

Changes, changes, changes

Marketing is much on my mind right now. In my opinion the most important marketing tool is a domain name. If someone reads one book and they want more how do they find out what else has been written? Use the author name and do a search on the web. Bingo, there is a list of books written and even advance notice of soon to be published.

I, in the first flush of writing, bought a domain name for myself. Set up a web side, a blog, Facebook and twitter account. Yes! I thought, I’m on top of the marketing thing.

Except — I finally, a year later, did a search on the internet using my web name and found that there was horror! another author with my name. Well, can’t have that! If someone looks me up, I want to be the only author with that author name. By author name I mean the name that appears on the book.  Janice Graham is already taken. So, the next think I do is use my initials – J. I. Graham. I did a domain name search and there is no one with that name in the .com verse. Excellent! I quickly grab the domain name – then starts the fun and games.

I have to change Beastmaster’s cover so my ‘new’ author names appears. Then I have to point my old web presence to the new web presence. Then I have to figure out how to get the blog to go to the new web presence without loosing the blog entries. Poke, poke, poking about and finally I have, I think, done the shift. Next up is the twitter and Facebook thing.

If you’re reading this, then I was successful with the blog. Of course if you’re not then how would I know?

Now, let’s not do this again!

Physcial description vs Personality

Writing is full of physical description being used as a short hand for personality. I’ve just realised that since I don’t use physical description then I’ve handicapped my characters. This, of course led to another discovery, I’m not very observant. I don’t watch people, I prefer to interact with them. But the activity becomes the focus of my attention and not the people around me. So I’m trying to describe a character now and I’m stumped. What does he actually look like and how does that mesh with his personality. Physical ‘ticks’ help keep characters separate in people’s minds. When I look around at the people I know, whatever ‘ticks’ they have are invisible to me. I am so used to them pausing before making a weighty pronouncement, or nibbling on finger nails or hair that I don’t see it as a ‘tick’. The tick doesn’t have to be intrusive or unpleasant, it could be what someone says when things are going well or bad.  The trick is to match the ‘tick’ to the personality and then make sure you don’t wear out it’s usefulness. Easier said then done.

 

 

 

Spam and WordPress

In March, I got terribly excited because I got new users, and then more new users, and then a veritable flood of new users. Looking at the email addresses, I noticed they all had the same email format, xxxxxxyyyy.yahoo. Much as I would love to have that many new readers, it is highly unlikely that they would all have discovered me at the same time. So, my conclusion, which may be erroneous, is that I was spammed. Solution, use a captcha.  Result, no new users, sigh.

The next thing I noticed is the comments I received. Most of them had an url attached to them which seemed suspect to me. I did a little research and it looks like some might be spam comments which were not caught by my Aksimet. Strangely, they all were generated in March but had to do with a post I wrote in November. Go figure. Solution, read each comment and if it appeared to not have anything to do with the post, trash it. Some may have gotten through but who am I to ignore comments which are postive?

So, if any of you commented and it didn’t show up, I am sorry. The rule of thumb now is that it has to have something to do with the post, which I think is reasonable.

Why would anyone try to spam a blog? It is rude to advertise your blog or website by spamming the comments section and adding your url to the comment, understandable in a grasping sort of way although still rude, but why register fake users to a blog? It just fills up the user list for no good reason. I suppose it is the same as spraying graffiti on walls. It doesn’t say much about someone who seeks power in petty annoyances anonymously. I feel sorry for them but wish they would go away.